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What is up with the way he stands??
He wants to appear tall, so he’s wearing giant lifts. Basically high heels disguised as normal shoes
Also hides his gut and adult diaper.
I’ve read that it’s a symptom of dementia, but I have no idea how credible that was.
He definitely wears lifts too
He’s a fat fuck.
Husky saddam
Chonkaddam
Sad damn
hands too big
This limerick has to be forced to have a decent flow. Who emphasizes the first syllable in “assured”? Lines 3 and/or 4 would probably flow better with an extra syllable, but are otherwise ok and have consistent feet.
Final verdict: 5/10, needs work
Also, the little logo at the bottom is trying way too hard
